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umm i could use your opinion with this poem?

Tuesday, April 15th, 2008

love_the_life_you_live_3 asked: ok so i don't know if it's good or not, or if the meaning is clear enough. a little help would be appreciated. positive and negative comments encouraged. thanks =] Bird in the Golden Cage I'm building up my diamond walls wandering the golden halls dancing in the false parade of the bird ...